heavy under
a misty veil
i see dimly
until
startled by a
cardinal
on a naked branch
and hope rises
on scarlet wings.
Linked to L.L. Barkat’s On, In, and Around Mondays and One Shot Wednesday.
Related links on scarlet hope:
daring to open doors
heavy under
a misty veil
i see dimly
until
startled by a
cardinal
on a naked branch
and hope rises
on scarlet wings.
Linked to L.L. Barkat’s On, In, and Around Mondays and One Shot Wednesday.
Related links on scarlet hope:
[…] Jessica was ready, looking deep when she captured this cardinal partly hidden behind leaves. Another near miss, perhaps. But there it is, a red harbinger of hope. […]
Billy Coffey says
That was lovely, Sandra.
Sandra says
Thanks, Billy. 🙂
HisFireFly says
Beautiful!
‘Let hope arise! Let God arise and let our enemies be scattered.
Sandra says
Now I’m ready to dance.
brian says
out of the mist a brilliant display of color…hope indeed rises…beautifully said. and thanks for linking up with oneshot!
Sandra says
Thanks so much. I’m glad I stumbled over you.
LauraLee Shaw says
Beautiful. His creation gives us so much to write about, and this is marvelous.
Sandra says
Thanks so much. You’re right–and we need to take time to look and listen.
Claudia says
hope rises on scarlet wings…beautiful
Sandra says
I’m glad to see you here, Claudia. Thanks.
dustus says
Peaceful lines that sound great. Enjoyed your poem. thanks
Sandra says
Thanks so much.
in the hush of the moon says
i love this, friend. it reminds me of emily dickinson…. i’m so glad you stopped by my blog so i could find you.
Sandra says
Really? Wow. I’ll bask in that today. 🙂 I’m so glad I found you, too.
Jay Cookingham says
Beautiful, reminded me of this…
Hope is that thing with feathers that perches in the soul and sings the tune without the words and never stops… at all. ~Emily Dickinson
Thanks Sandra!
Sandra says
Oh! I need to get Emily out and dust her off.
A Simple Country Girl says
Hello. You’ve changed things around, right? This is the place I visited last Thursday with all the shoe-shapers and wily squirrel talk?
This poem is me, all scarlet, but rising on Hope wings…
Blessings.
Sandra says
Yep. You found my new home. And I’m glad you did. Tomorrow I will be all disturbed and squirrely again. 🙂
S. Etole says
Isn’t it a gift to hear Him speaking through nature …
Sandra says
And isn’t that part of why He gave it to us? To reveal Himself?
Glynn says
We have a few mated pairs of cardinals around our house. We’ll see them at all times of the day — and now when I see them, I’ll think of “hope rising.”
Sandra says
I love cardinals. I hear they mate for life. I’d like to believe that.
Michelle DeRusha says
That was beautiful, Sandra. I do love a scarlet cardinal!
And I love your “new” site — in quotes, because I admit I have not been by in a bit…so it’s probably not totally new. But it looks great nonetheless.
Sandra says
Thanks, Michelle! Good to see you. You’re just in time for the housewarming party. This is only my third day in the new crib. 🙂
Sharkbait says
Nice!
pete marshall says
birds are my favourite and you did justice in this dazzling piece..thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers Pete
Bill Cook says
I love the simplicity and clarity here. Good writing. Solid. Thank you. I enjoy it. – Bill
L.L. Barkat says
I just love that you are writing so much poetry. 🙂
Connie Arnold says
That’s so lovely, a beautiful poem that evokes a beautiful image!
Cassandra Frear says
Beautiful simplicity.
T. Anne says
Beautiful new site! Loved the poem. How gifted you are. The picture is breath taking as well. Thank you for sharing!
mm says
A lovely moment, well written.
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Susan J. Reinhardt says
Hi Sandra –
Congrats on your new site! I’ll be back soon to explore each link. 🙂
Blessings,
Susan
Amanda says
This is worthy of a song!! Thanks for sharing x
Sandra says
Sweet. 😀
barbara says
Beautiful piece absolutely loved it!..bkm
Sandra says
Thank you, Barbara. And thanks for visiting.
Moondustwriter says
Creation is meant to be a reminder isn’t it. What a wonderful reminder to have that hope that the little ones of the air have.
I’m so glad you came by One Shot
smiles from the moon
Sandra says
I’m glad, too. 🙂
Desert rose says
very nice poem..those lines took me..:)
on a naked branch
and hope rises
on scarlet wing
beautiful feeling,well put in words..excellent!
:))
Sandra says
Thank you so much. And thanks for coming by.
Patti says
Who would not be hopeful just looking at that chubby little cardinal ablaze in his brilliant feathery coat? Very nice One-Shot.