Absolutely free!
But it can cause worse damage
yellow lace, age spots
from rusting.
Drives you a little crazy.
Rust–one of the toughest stains,
but all you really need
is the safer substitute,
a splash of something.
Swish!
A sweeter smelling way,
a secret liquid
that makes you tight and taut.
It’s all you really need
to breathe easy again.
Not a week goes by
that our feet don’t smell any more.
A river of dust pours
with a little of this.
Absolutely free
from rusting.
Are we crazy?
A response to another one of Tweetspeak Poetry’s crazy prompts.
Constructed with words cut from one of those advertising “magazines”
for a cleaning book.
Lyla Lindquist says
Tight, taut and no smelly feet?
I’m all over that!
This is great fun, Sandy.
Sandra says
Or age spots!
Megan Willome says
Are we crazy? Yes, we are! At least, I am.
Sandra says
I’m with you. Crazy. Yes.
Patricia says
So fun! Didn’t you make word art at Laity? I’ll be in touch regarding the conference, etc. Fun is on it’s way… and i don’t have smelly feet either. 😉
Sheila Seiler Lagrand says
I’m getting in line.