Okay, so I managed to whip up this little ditty while gazing out my office window.
All lined up
dressed to the T’s
shoulder to shoulder
hip to hip
and clip to clip
on vinyl pews
swaying in the spirit
and waving praises
in hallelujah colors.
daring to open doors
Aww, I LOVE this!! 😀 This made me happy, thanks Snady!!
Thanks, Laurie. Too bad I was only imagining today. 😉
Hi Sandy –
Very cute. 🙂
Blessings,
Susan
Thanks, Susan! 😀
Ooo…I love it! You always amaze me! 😀
🙂 Awww. Thanks.
Very nice. I like it all, but especially “waving praises / in hallelujah colors”
Thanks, Ben. Right now I’m looking at a pink sweatshirt on the ground. I think it got too boisterous with its praises. 🙂
This had me grinning from ear to ear! Just lovely!
Thanks so much, Talon. 🙂
Hallelujah… perfect.. lined up perfectly the words, the thought and the feeling…
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/07/whispers-love-dreams-and-imposter-hope.html
😀
I enjoyed this!
ecstasies
Thanks! 🙂
ah – this is really nice – such a common thing turned into a beautiful poem…great one shot!
Thanks, Claudia!
smiles. this brought back some nice memories…
dont have those pews these days…
nice one shot.
Those pews are one of the things I love about my backyard sanctuary. 😉
Ahh… one of my favorites. It made me want to go to church with you and sing hymns together.
Now I’d like that a lot.
Life seen from an unexpected angle, with fresh, spare verse-words. One of the most original-view poems I’ve read this week (there’s one, maybe two other poems that have that distinction).
Great stuff.
Wow. Thanks, Steve. I never, ever saw myself writing poetry. 🙂