Diving deep
I see
buried treasures
that swim
in glory.
Gogyohka poetry attempt inspired by L.F. Fiore and L.L. Barkat and offered up for One Shot Wednesday.
daring to open doors
Diving deep
I see
buried treasures
that swim
in glory.
Gogyohka poetry attempt inspired by L.F. Fiore and L.L. Barkat and offered up for One Shot Wednesday.
brian says
i must admit i am unfamiliar with the style, but the words say much. smiles. nice one shot!
Sandra says
Thanks. I’d never heard of it until this week either.
Sender MacLean says
Love the simplicity and elegance of this. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
Sandra says
Thanks. 🙂
Glynn says
Sometimes those treasures aren’t buried — but are as brilliant as that flower in the photo. Good one, Sandra.
Sandra says
Thanks! The flower turned out a lot more brilliant than it seemed without the deep see. 😉
Cassandra Frear says
I’m trying this poetry form tomorrow!
I love swans
Sandra says
And they were great!
Me, too.
Linda says
Lovely post and glad I have found your blog!
I am a nurse too but in England.
Blessings
Sandra says
Thank you, Linda. Always glad to meet another kindred spirit.
HisFireFly says
I’m glad you tried the form.. I found it interesting and fun! You did a splendid job.
Sandra says
It *was* fun. Thanks. Now I want to try a “triplet” like Cassandra did. 🙂
Eric Alder says
Gogyohka poetry seems to be the latest craze in the One Shot gallery lately. Nice job, Sandra!
Sandra says
Thanks, Eric. It did suddenly sweep through, didn’t it?
Elise Everyday Goddess says
very true, sometimes it’s farther down than we think it should be, but it’s worth the trip.
Sandra says
So true. Thanks for visiting, Elise.
Kenda says
Beautiful photos, beautiful poem…
Sandra says
Thanks, Kenda.
in the hush of the moon says
i love this… its brevity and beauty. well done!
Sandra says
🙂 Thanks, friend.
Maureen says
Lovely. I was unfamiliar with this form until LL noted it. Will have to try it.
The flower in the image looks like glass.
Sandra says
I’d never heard of it, either. But it was fun.
The flower is a small rose planted next to our garage. I think it wanted to pick up the reflection from the white siding. I was stunned.
dustus says
I’m not very familiar with Gogyohka, and the ones I’ve read today have opened my eyes to wanting to learn more about the form and trying one. Thanks. Nice One Shot!
Sandra says
I’m glad Glynn directed me toward you. This has been a good stretching experience. I’d never heard of it either.
Jingle says
lovely piece.
Sandra says
Thanks. 😀
Shashi says
What powerful words… I like it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya.
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My one shot Wednesday submission is here…
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/08/whispers-of-desires-conflicts-and.html
Sandra says
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting. Glad you liked it.
Claire says
oh my… this us no monster.
the texture of it is beautiful. i will include two links in the gallery for you ma’am.
Sandra says
I was so excited when I saw it! I’m having so much fun with even my little girl camera. Sometime I’ll talk to you about the teen camera. 🙂
ninotaziz says
The subject is lovely. The form is lovely. The words – sparse and tight. Lovely!
Simply marvelous.
Sandra says
Thanks. That is an encouragement.
Kathleen says
Pure elegance!
Sandra says
Thanks, Kathleen. 🙂
Monica Sharman says
Yes, glory swims deep…
pete marshall says
as i said in another comment i am learning a new style today…an great piece and thanks for sharing with one shot..cheers pete