Diving deep
I see
buried treasures
that swim
in glory.
Gogyohka poetry attempt inspired by L.F. Fiore and L.L. Barkat and offered up for One Shot Wednesday.
Buried Treasures
daring to open doors
daring to open doors
Diving deep
I see
buried treasures
that swim
in glory.
Gogyohka poetry attempt inspired by L.F. Fiore and L.L. Barkat and offered up for One Shot Wednesday.
i must admit i am unfamiliar with the style, but the words say much. smiles. nice one shot!
Thanks. I’d never heard of it until this week either.
Love the simplicity and elegance of this. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
Thanks. 🙂
Sometimes those treasures aren’t buried — but are as brilliant as that flower in the photo. Good one, Sandra.
Thanks! The flower turned out a lot more brilliant than it seemed without the deep see. 😉
I’m trying this poetry form tomorrow!
I love swans
And they were great!
Me, too.
Lovely post and glad I have found your blog!
I am a nurse too but in England.
Blessings
Thank you, Linda. Always glad to meet another kindred spirit.
I’m glad you tried the form.. I found it interesting and fun! You did a splendid job.
It *was* fun. Thanks. Now I want to try a “triplet” like Cassandra did. 🙂
Gogyohka poetry seems to be the latest craze in the One Shot gallery lately. Nice job, Sandra!
Thanks, Eric. It did suddenly sweep through, didn’t it?
very true, sometimes it’s farther down than we think it should be, but it’s worth the trip.
So true. Thanks for visiting, Elise.
Beautiful photos, beautiful poem…
Thanks, Kenda.
i love this… its brevity and beauty. well done!
🙂 Thanks, friend.
Lovely. I was unfamiliar with this form until LL noted it. Will have to try it.
The flower in the image looks like glass.
I’d never heard of it, either. But it was fun.
The flower is a small rose planted next to our garage. I think it wanted to pick up the reflection from the white siding. I was stunned.
I’m not very familiar with Gogyohka, and the ones I’ve read today have opened my eyes to wanting to learn more about the form and trying one. Thanks. Nice One Shot!
I’m glad Glynn directed me toward you. This has been a good stretching experience. I’d never heard of it either.
lovely piece.
Thanks. 😀
What powerful words… I like it.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya.
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My one shot Wednesday submission is here…
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2010/08/whispers-of-desires-conflicts-and.html
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting. Glad you liked it.
oh my… this us no monster.
the texture of it is beautiful. i will include two links in the gallery for you ma’am.
I was so excited when I saw it! I’m having so much fun with even my little girl camera. Sometime I’ll talk to you about the teen camera. 🙂
The subject is lovely. The form is lovely. The words – sparse and tight. Lovely!
Simply marvelous.
Thanks. That is an encouragement.
Pure elegance!
Thanks, Kathleen. 🙂
Yes, glory swims deep…
as i said in another comment i am learning a new style today…an great piece and thanks for sharing with one shot..cheers pete