Are We Crazy?

Absolutely free!

But it can cause worse damage

yellow lace, age spots

from rusting.

Drives you a little crazy.

Rust–one of the toughest stains,

but all you really need

is the safer substitute,

a splash of something.

Swish!

A sweeter smelling way,

a secret liquid

that makes you tight and taut.

It’s all you really need

to breathe easy again.

Not a week goes by

that our feet don’t smell any more.

A river of dust pours

with a little of this.

Absolutely free

from rusting.

Are we crazy?

 

A response to another one of Tweetspeak Poetry’s crazy prompts.
Constructed with words cut from one of those advertising “magazines”
for a cleaning book.

Comments

  1. says

    So fun! Didn’t you make word art at Laity? I’ll be in touch regarding the conference, etc. Fun is on it’s way… and i don’t have smelly feet either. ;)